Things About Sprigg’s Essay We Noticed
- Spriggs addressed the other points of views well and gave a bit of evidence even supporting the other side.
- She proved the evidence wrong, which built up her credibility.
- Sprigg’s argument didn’t have very solid facts, since her idea that she wanted to discuss is not something you can prove or disprove.
- Sprigg’s pictures added a good contrast for the farms.
Things About Our Essays We Noticed
- In Jacob’s essay, his author had a phD which made the author a bit more credible. His phD was in psychology (we think).
- In Jacob’s essay there is evidence and facts. There is a lot of solid facts, since the topic of school starting later is a tangible idea.
- Jacob’s essay had a very small counter argument. Same with Chloe’s. Same with Corben’s
- Corben’s essay was a very opinionated review, and there really wasn’t a counter argument for his paper. The counter argument would be not to buy it, but so far there hasn’t been a counter argument.
- Chloe’s essay didn’t have pictures, but if you had pictures of the topic “animal essay” it might be too graphic and scare people away.
- Riley did not have an essay, but has created a survey to collect personal responses.
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